[wellylug] Wellylug BBQ 2004

[Chris Harris]

> >  ... we are employing bouncers 
> > now ???  Don't get carried away with this organisation thing!
> > (Hey people might just want to attend for the social thing and not 
> > eat/drink even)
> 
> I wrote that, as we just don't want some people to turn up 
> and 'freeload' of everyone else. Is this okay, or should I change it?

Definitely

Those three musts come across as mean spirited and officious.
How about changing:

Registration:

This form allows you to register for the event. You must register to be
able to attend. You must also bring some food or equipment. If you don't
you will not be allowed to attend, because it would make it unfair on
the people who did bring something.
You must login to register for this event.

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Registration:

This form allows you to register for the event. You It would be helpful
to register. Please bring some food or equipment, I good idea is to
bring more than you expect to consume. If you don't that's fine, because
we would really like you to be there.
Please login to register for this event.

C